Keep your capitalization of the word God consistent.
Owen described the event as "The fated Baseball". However he was hospitalised for war neurosis and was sent for rehabilitation at Craiglockhart War Hospital in Edinburgh that May.
Works written by such writers as Siegfried Sassoon, Wilfred Owen, and Tim OBrien really reach out to the audience by way of the authors choice of words and images that they use in their writing Throughout Owen's life he demonstrated the same characteristics as a prophet through his actions and his words It is a well-crafted piece of literature.
Even when talking about things that happened in the past in the novel, you use present tense. In the beginning when John and Owen were eleven, they were both on the same baseball team These are lack of guidance, absence of matter, and religion and faith.